The worst thing that has ever happened to me happened when I was a senior high school student. I always parked in the school and I was allowed to ride bike without wearing helmet. However, one day, my school’s drillmaster announced that they would punish those student who didn’t wear a helmet. From that time, I parked my bicycle nearby my school.
However, there were many others parking in the new parking space that I chose. Every morning, I needed to get up early to snatch at a place. At first, I could get a place far from flowerpots and furnaces. A few months later, I got tired of getting up early and stopped doing it, and the worst thing that has ever happened to me happened on one of those days. One day, I parked my bike near the furnace, but my bike didn’t touch it at all.
At that time, I should go to cram school after getting out of classes. So when the school ring rang, I should hurry to go to the cram school. So ,as soon as I walked to my bike I saw there were many bikes around mine. Then I have never forgetted that scene is one of my bike’s handle is sticked to the furnace. In a flash, I thought maybe those neighbors had used furnaces. After seeing that, I ran to the classroom to borrow a penknife from classmates.
Before I walked back I guessed there may only few people. But there were still many people there. Therefore, I daren’t deal with my bike in front of everyone. So I took a walk nearby school. After few minutes, I went back and sliced through plastics of handle staelthy. In short, that was a terrible experience to me and my bike became funny from that time.
Hi Donna,
回覆刪除This piece is a lot better and clearer than your previous one! The newly added sentences and linking words provide enough information for your readers to understand what happened before and after the incident. I'm also glad you finally finished your revision, and it's a good one. :)